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Rushing sound
Blackbirds flee en masse
Filling trees
Replacing fallen leaves
Rustling
Mumbling black leaves
Like a sea
Myriad birds fly
Black wave
Soaring above fallen grain
Ending of a season
Blackbirds flee en masse
Filling trees
Replacing fallen leaves
Rustling
Mumbling black leaves
Like a sea
Myriad birds fly
Black wave
Soaring above fallen grain
Ending of a season
A Choka followed by a Tanka. A Choka is 5 syllables folowed by a 7 syllable sentence. Followed by more stanzas. (The shortest I found was three long.) One can keep adding stanzas as desired. I followed it up with a Tanka cause my example ended in a Tanka.
Today was very interesting. The blackbirds, who have always been in rather small numbers in my lifetime have grown substainstially this year. The sheer number of them I saw today makes me wonder if this is what it was like in the past. Back when, according to my dad, they'd fill the sky for hours. I surely saw a lot today! They literally filled the trees, all while large groups flied overhead. I stumbled across a large group that took off in flight just a few feet away from me, all together. Made one heck of a sound. I took some pictures, and got pics of them in the trees as well as some flying over a field.
Justin Latimer 2009-MMIX
Today was very interesting. The blackbirds, who have always been in rather small numbers in my lifetime have grown substainstially this year. The sheer number of them I saw today makes me wonder if this is what it was like in the past. Back when, according to my dad, they'd fill the sky for hours. I surely saw a lot today! They literally filled the trees, all while large groups flied overhead. I stumbled across a large group that took off in flight just a few feet away from me, all together. Made one heck of a sound. I took some pictures, and got pics of them in the trees as well as some flying over a field.
Justin Latimer 2009-MMIX
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bravo :]